Creative Residencies at the McLoughlin Gardens

A bit of quiet and solitude away from home go a long way to helping an artist focus. Last summer a number of poets, writers, and visual artists from the Comox Valley and farther afield were able to spend a week or two at the Gardens. At the end of their visit we asked them to submit a brief report.

Cindy Monahan, Jeweller wrote:

I am writing to say a huge thank you for my residency here at McLoughlin Gardens!  It has been an amazing week.  This place is so special and I am grateful to have been able to spend this time here.

I split my time between creating new pieces and working on a website. I loved being able to do both these activities, without interruptions, and having this quiet and beauty around me. I know that I would never have been able to focus and go to a deeper level with my art and business without this opportunity...there are way too many distractions and challenges at home!

I also allowed myself to “create” from a different place, I let the day inspire me in whatever way it showed up to do that, as opposed to working from an idea in my head.  It was great, and again much harder to do at home! 

A new book by Arleen Paré!

A writer at work…

Arleen in the cottage at the McLoughlin Gardens

Book Review by Judy LeBlanc

In 2018, Victoria poet Arleen Paré spent four weeks at the McLoughlin Gardens as writer-in-residence. During her tenure, while meeting with local writers to discuss their work, Arleen completed a first draft of her latest book. First was published by Brick Books and released in May 2021. 

First is Paré’s seventh collection of poetry, though two of these books, Paper Trail and Leaving Now, have also been described as mixed genre fiction and nonfiction. Paper Trail won the Victoria Butler Book Prize. Her third book, Lake of Two Mountains, won the 2014 Governor General’s award and the CBC Bookie award. The Girls with Stone Faces, her fifth book, won the American Golden Crown Award for poetry in 2018. Earle Street was released by Talon Books in 2020, and now a year later, First has been released.

On her website, Paré describes how her writing is motivated by becoming “smitten” with a topic then goes on to say that the form “must be able to convey the intensity of that topic in the best way possible.”  In the writing that spans First, there is a sense of artistic obsession as Paré ranges across a myriad of inquiries that probe the meaning of beginnings, both cosmic and in our ordinary lives. One gets the impression that Paré has sat deeply with these questions and allowed the form that best renders any possible answers to them to emerge. The book is scaffolded by the story of a first best friend in childhood and the mystery of her fifty year disappearance from Paré’s life. Everyone from Nancy Drew to Einstein are invoked in understanding both the childhood bond, the disappearance, and the subsequent search. Within this framework, amongst other concerns, Paré explores life on a suburban Montreal street in the 1950s, a variety of firsts: first borns, first place, first friends, while sometimes foregrounding the inherent larger questions around the meaning of time and the origin of the universe.

A playfulness along with a hint of irreverence pervades these pages, both in poetic form and in content. In a prose piece, she describes a time she woke from her sleep to a figure seated at her desk. “Nancy Drew at your service,” announced the figure. A list poem is entitled “Twelve Basic Interrogative Fragments.” Now and then brief prose sections function as transitional though not in any predictable structure. Paré’s language, too, is ever surprising with an attention to sound and image that is sometimes musical and often destabilizing with truncated lines and ample use of white space. Read aloud: “Never mind, there is always porridge with a sift of salt and garbage bins under the sink whispering misery in an offkey pitch.” The page that begins with “Because the moon…” is a tender lyrical poem occurring within pages of prose poetry. In the piece that begins “There is a certain wash of light…” we are taken into a rhythmic close observation of a fly reminiscent of the work of Emily Dickinson. Throughout First, Paré demonstrates a range that engages the readers through many forms and layers of meaning.

 Paré has a way of pressing the reader into their own investigation. I was led through my own reminiscences of telephone party lines and skipping rope games towards questions of the origins of the universe to land on that startling inconclusive final line of the book, “…and yet, the question still had wings.” 

 In a recent conversation with Paré, she fondly recalled her time at McLoughlin Gardens. “The isolation, the wilderness shoreline, the garden itself and the surrounding cedars, concentrated my writerly efforts and made writing First a daily pleasure,” she said. 

McLoughlin Gardens is pleased to have provided a creative space for this writer and thus played a small part in enabling the fine work that you will read in Arleen Paré’s First

Paré has written a postscript to First, a long poem entitled Last, that will be published and released by Baseline Press on June 21, 2021.

https://www.baselinepress.ca/shop/last-arleen-pare-2021

 

Sarah McLoughlin dies at 83

The McLoughlin Gardens has lost our original gardener, Sarah McLoughlin. Sarah died on February 10 at Mt. St. Joseph’s Hospital in Vancouver. With her husband Brian who died in 2014, Sarah leaves an extraordinary legacy - a garden and park for the whole community to enjoy.

Wearing a straw hat and gardening gloves, Sarah McLoughlin’s habit was to step out every morning after breakfast, to walk around her garden and see what needed attention. In the days of the nut orchard, she would load up the old station wagon with tools and drive up the hill to begin weeding, mulching, or pruning the filbert trees, systematically working down the slope of the orchard, row by row. If the sun was too hot, she would move to the shade, tidying up the borders along the side of the winding grassy road, staking the flowering currants, considering where she might plant an interesting tree.

Sarah’s sense of design is evident throughout the McLoughlin Park, from the gate to the seashore, from the house to the gardens that surround it.

If you would like to make a donation in memory of Sarah, please visit our donation page here. Or go directly to The McLoughlin Gardens Fund at Vancity Community Foundation.

A writer-in-residence at work...

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The playwright and his list…

Marcus reviews one of his to-do lists.

After two weeks at the McLoughlin Gardens, Marcus sent in his first report. This is a rare glimpse of a playwright at work, juggling many projects at once, while also reflecting on the impact of current restrictions on actors, directors, and theatre companies. In a time when work, learning, and entertainment have mostly migrated to online platforms, what is being lost? What distinguishes live theatre from online performance?

Make yourself a cup of tea, or pour a glass of lemonade and enjoy reading this report from the McLoughlin Gardens’ first playwright-in-residence…

Marcus Youssef writes:

Week One

I had a few short-term deadlines that I wanted to get out of the way. In addition to the full-length pieces I’m writing I almost always have a few shorter commissions/articles on the go. Two were due at the end of the first week. 

The first was a short, ten minute commission for an on-line festival the Arts Club Theatre is presenting in August. They asked all recent recipients of their Sliver Commissions (for a full-length play) to write and record a short piece of any kind – a script if you want, or something more conversational, for their Dialled Up Festival. I’ve been thinking a lot about theatre’s recent, somewhat panicked attempt to migrate online in the face of Covid’s shutdown of live performance venues. I have done some online work too, and not liked much of what I’ve done or seen. This is, in fact, what my piece is about – a kind of spoken essay about this moment, and what it means to be an artist whose practice depends on being in the room, in close proximity with others, both artists and audiences. For me it’s not only something we depend on. It’s actually at the heart of what I care about in the form: physical contact with others, and the cellular, unconscious information that is exchanged by humans (and all living creatures) when they are literally, physically, actually together. You can see the piece via this link: https://digital.artsclub.com/dialled-up

Marcus in his laptop.jpeg

A writing studio with a view

Self-portrait of the writer at work in the shed at the McLoughlin Gardens…

The second piece I finished in Week One was also an on-line commission (there’s a lot of that these days), for Tarragon Theatre in Toronto, where I’m a playwright-in-residence. In the early Covid days they, like the Arts Club, commissioned short pieces from their resident playwrights. These were explicitly designed to be performed now, online, and a year from now, hopefully in person, at the Tarragon, in the Dupont area of Toronto – though who knows. After those were broadcast, the amazing U of T scholar Kathleen Gallagher approached the Tarragon and worked with them to commission the writers to write and record a 20 minute reflection/analysis about their pieces – what their process was, the thinking that went into it, how it unfolded. This will be used by Kathleen and other profs in their theatre classes, as a way of exploring how artists are responding the Covid moment, in their practice. I have thoroughly enjoyed doing this – we don’t often get the chance to reflect on something we’ve written in that way, and I find it helps clarify things for me, about process, about how I figure out what I care enough to write about. 

Week One was also the last of an exciting series of online conversations I’ve been honoured to moderate with Canadian and Argentinian theatre artists. The series was produced by CAPACOA (the Canadian Arts Presenters umbrella organization), FIBA, the Festival Internacional de Buenos Aires (Argentina’s largest performing arts festival) and the Canadian embassy in Buenos Aires. Hosted by myself and the Artistic Director of FIBA, Federico Irazábal, and co-curated with the artistic director of Canadian Stage in Toronto, Brendan Healey, each conversation had a focus in relationship to theatre in the Covid era. The focus of this final conversation was “Defiance” and was between four artists, two Canadian, two Argentinian, for whom challenging the status quo has been central to their work for a long time. Very cool to do this from here, and get to show folks from around the world this remarkable residency space.

The English version hasn’t been released yet, but here’s a link to the Spanish version … Defiance.

Marcus continues:

I also completed rewrites for my most commercial (!) play, The Christmas Unicorn (a family holiday show!), which premiered at the Arts Club in Vancouver last December. The Centaur Theatre will produce it in Montreal next. It was originally scheduled for this holiday season but will instead (pandemic willing) happen there in 2021. We had done an online workshop the week before we left Vancouver and I implemented the rewrites from that. One of the great joys of having my plays produced more and more after the first production is it means I get a chance to implement what I have learned from the first production in subsequent, post-premiere drafts. It’s frankly impossible to truly know how a script for live performance does or doesn’t work before you get to experience it with a variety of audiences. Second and subsequent productions allow the playwright to employ the information that comes from that experience. 

I also negotiated the rights for the latest production of my play for teenagers, Jabber in Germany. It’s having a remarkable life there. The German premiere by Berlin’s GRIPS Theatre in 2019 won the Ikarus prize, for outstanding production for young audiences in Berlin. It is now part of GRIPS’ repertoire and is produced there every year. In addition there are half a dozen other German productions, at state theatres across the country, from Nuremberg to Hamburg to Munich. The most recent to be announced is in the Frankfurt state theatre, as well as Vienna’s storied Burgtheater

Week Two

This was almost entirely devoted to one project: the screenplay adaptation of my play (both co-written with my long-time collaborator James Long) Winners and LosersWinners and Losers is a show Jamie and I both performed in and we toured for five years, to more than 20 cities across 12 countries in Europe and North America, including a five-week off-Broadway run at Soho Rep in New York City. Vancouver filmmaker Mina Shum optioned the rights and we have been writing a film adaptation with her for the last year or so. We spent all week working on the second draft, which we hoped to finish, but (sadly) we don’t think we have yet (sigh). We’ve added another day on Monday, but then I really need to turn my attention to the work that I am supposed to be doing while here. This is principally a first draft of the play I was calling Our Refugees but now I think might be called, Otherwise Occupied. This involves reviewing a pile of documentary research and then getting to work on the draft, which will take several weeks of mostly full-time work. 

The other thing of note I did in Week Two was the first meeting with a bunch of students from the University of Windsor and Toronto-based director Mitchell Cushman. Mitchell’s company (Outside the March) and UW have commissioned me and three other writers to write short original zoom plays for their advanced acting students, to be entirely rehearsed and performed on zoom. I’m excited about this. It’s a chance to try to figure out how I can make intentional use of online platforms. It’s an opportunity to write specifically for actors. They are now busy making videos in response to a series of questions that Mitchell and I posed to them, about their Covid lives, about the reckoning around race that’s occurring across society, and their hopes and dreams for a very uncertain future. 

Phew! A lot. 

Xox, and in deep appreciation

Marcus

Writing for Live Performance: A Workshop with Marcus Youssef

On August 20th, writer-in-residence Marcus Youssef gave a one-day workshop for emerging writers focusing on dialogue and character-driven writing and storytelling. 

The workshop was held outside and in the studio/shed on the secluded grounds of the Brian and Sarah McLoughlin Regional Park at Williams Beach in Merville. Eight writers attended, including novelists, spoken word artists, children’s book writers, poets, playwrights and one writer from Boston who just happened to be in the area. 

Marcus Youssef, 2020 Writer-in-Residence

How did Marcus Youssef come to be our writer-in-residence? It’s all thanks to Ted Little, a new addition to our Literary Programming Committee who has connections with members of the theatre community across Canada. Reading through his bio, one realizes the extent of Ted’s experience, and what a tremendous asset he is to the artistic and cultural life of the Comox Valley.

Ted’s bio:
Ted Little is a Comox-Valley-born theatre maker, writer, and educator with a particular passion for community engaged theatre and art making. Recently retired from his position as professor of theatre at Montreal’s Concordia University, Ted has returned to the Comox Valley to build a home. 

Ted’s teaching, research, and creative practice engage with participatory and interdisciplinary approaches to creating collaborative theatre and performance projects in diverse rural and inner-urban environments.  From 2000-2017, Ted was Associate Artistic Director of Teesri Duniya Theatre--a Montreal-based company dedicated to the creation and production of socially and politically relevant theatre based on the cultural experiences of diverse communities, and from 2000-2012, Ted was Editor-in-Chief of alt.theatre a journal examining intersections between politics, cultural plurality, and theatre.

His recent publications include co-authorship of Going Public. The Art of Participatory Practice with documentary film-maker Elizabeth Miller and oral historian Steven High (U.B.C. Press, 2017), and a collection of essays from the Montreal Life Stories Project entitled Remembering Mass Violence with co-editors Steven High, and Thi Ry Duong—coordinator of the project’s Cambodian Working Group (U. Toronto Press, 2014).

Winter Writing Workshop with Jeanette Taylor

The McLoughlin Gardens Society has invited writer and historian Jeanette Taylor to give a six-week writing class at the Courtenay Museum. The class begins January 18 and will continue every two weeks until March 28, 2020.

Here are the details:

Saturdays: 1 – 4 p.m.

Six sessions: January 18, February 1, 15 (long weekend) & 29, March 14 & 28

Registration Fee: $305 members, $325.00 non-members

Writing a memoir, family history, biography or fiction requires story crafting, editing savvy, and planning structures. Author and historian JeanetteTaylor believes learning to write both fiction and nonfiction requires both writing craft skills and great storytelling. “Whether you’re writing for family or hope to publish a novel, it’s all about presenting a memorable tale and characters who grab the imagination of readers,” says Taylor.    

She takes participants through all the phases of a project, from research and creative writing tips to thoughts about publication. While the class is geared to those new to creative writing, it’s also applicable to experienced scribes who want to get recharged for the season ahead. 

Registrants should have a subject in mind, with the basic research done, as a starting-point for class exercises. Interactive discussion and writing exercises focus on story planning, finding focus, character development, settings, scenes, writing craft, voice, writer’s block, self-motivation, and publication options. Class exercises and homework will advance your in-process writing.

The bi-monthly schedule allows time for homework, as you polish a final extract for instructor and peer critiques. You will receive a comprehensive binder of handouts to guide continuing work. An e-mail address is required, to share writing.

Registration information:

Society members who are interested in taking the class are invited to register by contacting board member Christine Dickinson by phone at 250-331-0600 or by e-mail at chrisda@shaw.ca to arrange a deposit of $100.

Non-members are also welcome to attend. A deposit of $125 is requested to hold your place. Please contact Christine to arrange a deposit.

Reflections on Summer Workshops

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In July, writer-in-residence Maleea Acker gave two workshops for members of the McLoughlin Gardens Society and anyone else who wished to attend. Landscapes of the Heart: An Introduction to Field Journaling was held at the McLoughlin Gardens. We began on the porch of the cottage, and then roamed about the gardens, ending up in the shed working on our field journals.

Participants had some lovely comments to share:

"Thanks for the wonderful opportunity to experience this workshop in this location. Unexpectedly, I particularly loved being in the shed and listening to the rain!"

"I was really inspired by this workshop. I have lots of art experience but field journaling is relatively new to me. I always love to “be” somewhere and actually try new activities versus reading about them or watching videos. The ambience was lovely. I see myself blending field journaling with art journaling and thinking of ways to pass this onto my art students too, while continuing to build/evolve my practice."

When asked how she might incorporate field journaling into her creative practice, one participant wrote: "I have often taken a sketchbook and paints with me on trips, but never felt confident in putting brush to paper. Now, because of the workshop, I do feel confident to do this. I learned that it is less about “product” and more about “process.” I thought that I would like the contour drawing the least, but am now really enjoying doing contour drawings as a practice for focusing my attention and bringing awareness to my drawing (and the unexpectedness of the results). Since the workshop, I have spent less of my free time online, and more time outside with my sketchbook and paints. I see this as a wonderful way to journal, but also as we learned, to gain a deeper understanding of the places around me."